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Getting Ready to Apply to College (Part 4- The Essay)

This is part four of a six-part series titled “Getting Reading to Apply to College” for juniors who are preparing to apply to college in a few months.  For this post I will be focusing on the college essay.  The college essay is certainly the part of the application that should take the most time to complete.  It should take at least a week to complete the Common Application personal statement.  A day or two to complete the rough draft, a couple days to get two people to proofread it (that are not mom or dad), a day to revise it and then a couple more days to have someone look over it again.  Below are the three different essays that seniors applying to college are asked to write for the majority of colleges.  Let me also say that there are colleges that may not ask for any essays and there are colleges that may ask for an additional essay beyond these three, but if a senior has written each of these three essays, they should be able to meet the college application essay requirements at the majority of colleges they apply to.  There are a few colleges that have really unique essay questions (University of Chicago) and there are some colleges that may ask for a program specific essay if you are looking to pursue a specific major.  Before I talk about these three essays, I would like to promote my College Essay Academy course this summer.  Each rising senior who takes this course will complete all three of these essays by the end of the course which will save them a lot of stress and time when applying to college in the fall.  There are two separate weeks that the College Essay Academy course will be offered this summer.  The first week will be from June 26th-30th and the second week will be from July 31st-August 4th.  To register for the College Essay Academy course please go to www.dccs.org/summer and click on “register for camp”.  If you have any questions or have trouble registering please do not hesitate to contact Nancy Homan, DC Summer Programs Admin Assistant, at nhoman@dccs.org.  

Below are the three essays that a majority of colleges may require.

Common Application Personal Statement– The Common Application is now being completed by over 90% of seniors.  The number of colleges that accept the Common Application is now over 1,000.  I tell my students that I strongly recommend they complete this essay before they begin their senior year.  The Common Application essays this coming school year (’23-’24) are the same as last year. This is an essay that every college a student applies to through Common Application should read carefully. There are a handful of colleges that may not require this essay but if you have a college that does, you should send the essay to every college you apply to through Common App anyway. This is always the toughest essay to write because it is subjective and a student really needs to brainstorm to come up with a topic to write about.  Below are my top tips when writing this essay:

  1. Stay within the word limit–  The Common Application puts the word limit on the personal statement essay at 650 words.  You do not have to go right up to the word limit though.  It is okay to end your essay when you get close to 550 words.  A Yale admission counselor once said, “If you do not have anything else to say, stop writing and leave us hanging a bit”.
  2. Choose an appropriate topic– Choosing the topic to write about is probably the toughest part of this essay.  Great essay topics involve when you have overcome adversity, solved a problem or something that is unique to you that may be different than a lot of other students. Another tip for a great topic is that it should be “uncommon” and “elastic”. What do I mean? Watch this video (2:50 mark).
  3. Start with an anecdote– An anecdote is “a short and amusing or interesting story about a real person”.  This is a great way to start your essay and bring the reader right into the action and get their attention.
  4. Write about a moment in time– The Common Application personal statement is not an essay to tell your entire life story or list accomplishments or activities that are already on your application and resume.  It is supposed to let the admissions counselor who is reading the essay get a perspective about you that they did not get from the application or your resume.  So you should be writing about a moment in time, not what happened over months or years.

The “Why Us” Essay- This essay is letting colleges know why you would like to attend their school.  Why would you want to attend their school over other schools you are applying to?  For most colleges that have a “why us” essay, this essay is even more important than the Common App personal statement.  A “why us” essay prompt could be worded a number of different ways, but what the college wants from you, is to let them know why you would be a good fit at their school and what contributions will you make to their campus culture and community. A few things to pay attention to when writing this essay are:

  1. Do your research– If you say that you want to go to their college because, “the campus is beautiful”, “they have good academics”, “I can major in Business” or “there are small class sizes”, to name a few, this may all be true, but you have said nothing that shows you have done any research beyond what is on the front page of their website.  You need to be more specific to show that you spent the time getting an understanding about their school that makes them more distinct than other schools.  Things that stand out more may be particular majors or programs that are offered (if you are interested), mention something specific that you saw or were made aware of one a tour or a club or activity that they have that you had to research to find.
  2. Be careful when you cut and paste– You may have to write this essay for a couple different colleges.  Admission counselors say they are always surprised with how many students send them an essay with another colleges name in it or cut and paste something that is not correct.  This can be easily avoided by just having someone proofread it.
  3. It doesn’t hurt to name drop– Whether it is a professor at the college you met or an alum of the school that recommended the school to you initially, it doesn’t hurt to mention individuals that impacted your decision to apply to that school. It may also be good to email a professor at the school and ask them a few questions and then include this interaction in your essay.

The Extra-Curricular Essay- Colleges ask for this essay so they get an idea of something you are really passionate about.  Typically, it will ask you to pick one thing that you listed as an extracurricular activity in your application and explain why it’s important to you.  The college admissions office would like to know how you are going to impact their campus and so this activity you talk about should be something you plan on continuing to stay involved in if you go to their school.  Quick tip, everything you did in high school you should say you would like to do in college. First, you never know if you may like it even if it wasn’t your favorite thing to do in high school and second, no college is going to come back to you and penalize you for not doing it. A few things to pay attention to for this essay are:

  1. Do not list your resume in this essay. The admissions office already has your application and resume.  They do not want you to repeat what is already on these two documents. They are typically looking for one activity you are most passionate about.
  2. Write about something you have done that has impacted others– Colleges look for students who will make a difference in others lives.  So writing how you played on a sports team could be risky.
  3. Keep it positive– This is not an essay to get into philosophical perspectives or talk about adversity or a problem.  You want to keep it positive and at the end of the essay they need to be as excited to bring you on to their campus to get involved in whatever you are talking about as much as you are to get involved.

The college essay is a very important part of the application for most colleges if they require one or more to be written, especially ones that are more competitive to get in. What’s most important is giving yourself plenty of time to write it and having at least two people (because one can catch something the other one didn’t) proofread the essay before you submit it.  I am always willing an able to proofread a college essay.

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Congratulations Class of 2017!

This graduating class of seniors at Delaware County Christian School is the first I have worked with since I started the College Counselor Corner blog back in January. I want to start a tradition of recognizing and congratulating each class that I work with because first, they should be recognized for all of their hard work but second, to let those of you who read my blog know who I work with and the seniors that teach me so much throughout each year.

The DC Class of 2017 is an outstanding class filled with future artists, entrepreneurs, teachers, computer programmers, doctors, ministry leaders, fashion designers, engineers and much more. There are 72 students in the class and they are attending 48 different colleges. Below are two pictures of a map of the United States and Pennsylvania that I update every April on the wall outside my office with the current class of seniors. I put their senior picture and school name over the location on the map where they will be attending.

On the 2nd to last day of school for the seniors, they are able to wear a shirt of the college they will be attending. Below is this year’s picture. Listed below the picture are the names of each senior in the picture and then those that are not in the picture. You may need to save the picture on your device and make it larger to view it more clearly.

1st Row (left to right): Molly Harnish (George Mason), Stella Yang (Penn State), Ayanna King (Virginia Weslyan), Allie Zubyk (Syracuse), Alex Thompson (St. Bonaventure), Ciara Mullen (Univ of Richmond), Cheyenne March (Liberty), Kaley Matthews (Fordham), Ying Zhou (Penn State), Taylor Mingle (Davidson), Maddie Coury (Virginia Tech), Rebekah Brown (Arizona State), Maggie Linton (JMU), Ana Yee (Harvard)

2nd Row (left to right): Leah Pulliam (Liberty), Christian Yanes (Bucknell), Daniel Poirier (Springfield College), Nina Mirzai (Loyola Marymount), Broderick Soland (One Life Institute), Johnny Hughes (Lipscomb), Stephen Hansen (Drexel), Ben Tyson (Covenant College), Nate Carroll (Liberty), Elizabeth Hawkins (Temple), Tirzah Peddy (Spelman), Alivia Thompson (Gordon), Sarah Perry (West Chester), Kiersten Elken (Kutztown), Ava Berzinsky (Ohio State), Sunny Shin (Gordon), Molly Wells (Butler)

3rd Row (left to right): Caleb Madison (Penn State- Brandywine), Josh Grieb (Temple), Cody Moorhatch (Temple), Jaime Fitzgerald (Univ of Pittsburgh), Kouadio Toukou (Univ of Pittsburgh), Davis O’Leary (Taylor), Daniel Nichols (Univ of Tennessee), Dawson Garner (Penn State- Abington), In front of Davis O’Leary, Kal Elias (Univ of Delaware), TJ Tann (Univ of Richmond), Elisha Abney (La Salle), Jedaiah Ngalande (Stanford), Winston Harris (Temple), Niya Ray (Spelman), Olivia Smith (Eastern), Julie Zhou (School of Visual Arts), Rachel Smith (Cairn), Chandler Harvey (St. Johns Univ), Rhonda Rinicella (Univ of Pittsburgh), Ronnie Marie Falasco (Amherst), Claudia Norton (Penn State).

Not in Picture: Rachel Bae (Villanova), Ethan Harvey (Grove City), Jake Gutowski (Kutztown), Jake Allen (Kutztown), Michael Alford (Eastern), Peyton Azar (West Virginia Univ), Jacob Favino (Wheaton), Jackson Lee (Embry- Riddle Aeronautical), Harry Lin (Univ of British Columbia), Nick McManus (Penn State- Brandywine), Adaeze Nwobodo (Univ of Pittsburgh), Lea Pan (Undecided), Reggie Parks (Penn State- Abington), Todd Romero (Bloomsburg), Wendy Su (undecided), Alicia Thomson (The Masters College), Grace Sutphin (Univ of Tampa), Ella Yuan (PSU-Abington), Manyi Zhang (SUNY- Stony Brook).

To view a list of colleges that the DC Class of 2017 has been accepted to go to http://www.dccs.org/cf_news/view.cfm?newsid=979. This is not a complete list of acceptances but just a snapshot that was published on our website back in early April.

Once again, congratulations DC Class of 2017! I will be praying that your transition to college is an exciting and smooth one. God has great plans for you!

 

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Getting Ready to Apply To College- Part 3 (The SAT and ACT)

This is part three of a six-part series titled “Getting Read to Apply to College” for juniors who are preparing to apply to college in a few months.  For this post I will be focusing on the SAT and ACT.  I am not going to go into details about the test’s themselves, talk about which one is best to take or any test-taking strategies.  We are in a very different world now with most colleges being “test optional” for admissions which means that you don’t have to submit a test score when applying to that school. More than half of seniors applying to college today, decide not to send colleges their test scores. At this point, I still recommend to my juniors that they should have taken one of each test and then they should take the one they did better on again in June. The reason I recommend this strategy is because I have found that most students will perform better on either the SAT or ACT.  What do I consider to be “better”?  If you scored 50 points better in comparison on the SAT than the ACT or two points on your composite score better in comparison on the ACT than the SAT.  The best comparison charts I have found are at http://www.compassprep.com/comparing-act-and-new-sat-scores/. I do not recommend that students sign up to take the writing section of the ACT. Why? Because the SAT doesn’t have a writing section anymore and colleges will not look at your score for admissions purposes.  The 2nd time you take whatever test you did better on should be when you put in the most preparation. You could pay for a course, tutor, etc. or whatever you think is necessary to score your best on the test. Some students can prepare on their own because they are more disciplined to put in the time.

So you take the SAT or ACT for the 2nd time and get your score, now what do you do? This is what I would like to focus on for the rest of this post. Below are my recommendations to rising seniors when it comes to the SAT or ACT.

  1. Should I take the test a 3rd time?  Pre-covid, 80% of seniors took the SAT or ACT a third time. Post-covid, in the test-optional world we are in now, less than 30% of seniors take the test a 3rd time. Why? Because after you have taken one of each, prepare and then take the test a 2nd time, your score is pretty much what it’s going to be. Unless you think you could prepare differently or more (because maybe you didn’t prep much at all for your 2nd test), I wouldn’t recommend taking it a 3rd time. The only big reason you may want to take a 3rd test in your senior year, is because you know the college you are applying to heavily values or requires a strong score.
  2. If a college is test-optional, how do I know whether to send or not send them my best score? Each college is going to provide their mid-50% ranges for the SAT and ACT for students that were admitted and enrolled at their school for the previous year. These are the numbers to go by when determining whether to submit your score(s). If you are below the mean (average) of the mid-50%, DO NOT SUBMIT YOUR SCORE(S). You can find the mid-50% score range information for colleges at collegescorecard.ed.gov, collegedata.com or the most accurate place to find updated test scores in is a colleges website or Common Data Set.
  3. Should I always send my score(s) if I’m above the mean score that a college posts? If you have achieved very well in the classroom (4.5 GPA or better) and taken pretty rigorous courses (mostly honors and AP), then you may not want to send your SAT or ACT score(s) to colleges you apply to, even if you are above the mean that they post. You should be in the top 25th percentile of a colleges test score range if you have very strong grades and courses, in order to be comfortable sending your scores to a competitive admissions college.
  4. How do the colleges I apply to get my scores? You need to send your best score to each college that you apply to through collegeboard.org (SAT) or actstudent.org (ACT).  Most colleges will not accept a score that is on the transcript as official.  A handful do but you would need to let me know if you are applying to a school that does.  Both testing agencies allow you to send your score(s) to up to four colleges for free if you enter these schools into the “send scores” option when registering for the test.  The college(s) will then get your score when you get them online so you do not have the option of knowing what your score was beforehand.  It does cost $11-$12 to send your score to a college after you know what your score is.  I tell my students never to send your first score on a test to a college but if you want to save money, and the school you are applying to isn’t a reach school, it isn’t a bad idea to send your 2nd score to a college beforehand because it could save you $50 in the end.  Your 2nd score should be your better score anyway.
  5. Should I self-report my score on an application? My answer to this question is always no. So many times students have let colleges know of scores they didn’t want to officially send them because when completing the application they just filled in the space when it asked them to self-report their scores and they then gave the college every score they ever had. When it asks you in an application if you would like to self-report your scores, say “no” and send them the official score that you want them to see through collegeboard.org or actstudent.org. For both tests, you have the option of “score choice” so you only need to send them your best score.  There are a few of the most competitive colleges that require you to send all of your scores but this is rare.  
  6. Please do not delay in getting colleges your scores. From my experience, the one thing that holds up colleges from reviewing a students application is that they haven’t received the students scores.  Either a student (or parent) forgets to send them and then they end up paying a lot of money to rush them to the colleges.  The student or parents forget that it is their responsibility to send the colleges their score(s) from collegeboard.org or actstudent.org.  I had a student once not be considered for early action because his scores got to the school too late.  He had everything else in except his scores.  Please do not let this happen to you.  Have a plan when you will send your scores in to the colleges you are applying to and stick with it.
  7. Remember that a test score does not define you and move on.  Students (and parents) can get hung up on “wanting” a certain score or thinking that their future depends on an SAT or ACT score. Now that most colleges are test optional, an admissions officer will say, “if you don’t think your score is an accurate reflection of your ability and we can get a stronger sense of who you are as a student from your courses and grades, then DON’T SEND US YOUR SCORE”!  I would prefer that you focus on the aspects of the application that you can control.  Can you show any more interest that that you haven’t yet? Have you updated your resume, visit if they haven’t yet, ask to interview, e-mail or call and ask any questions to the admissions counselor who is going to read their application, etc.? These are things they can still control and can really help them get admitted.  I typically do not recommend taking the test a 4th and 5th time because data shows that scores will not go up anymore at this point and may even go down.

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Getting Ready to Apply to College- Part 2 (The College Application)

This is the the second part of a six-part series titled “Getting Ready To Apply to College”.  For this post I will be focusing on the college application itself.  It is really important to understand that the application is the first thing that colleges will read when you apply to their school.  This may sound obvious but I remind my students all the time that even if they have good grades, test scores and extracurriculars; if their application is not filled in correctly or contains a number of errors, this will put you in the “denied” pile pretty quick.  Nevertheless, completing the application today is a bit easier than completing the application 15 years ago because almost all colleges now have their application online.  When completing it online, it will typically tell you if something is missing or incomplete.  Below is some helpful information and advice when completing the college application:

  1. Complete the Common Application if you can. The Common Application (commonapp.org) is the most popular application today.  The number of colleges that now accept it is over 1,000 so the odds are overwhelming that you will be completing it for at least one or more of the colleges you apply to.  The Common Application continues to make user friendly updates each year as well.  Now a junior can complete the information under the “Common App” tab and it will roll over into the new year when they are a senior.  They also added Google Drive integration to make it easy to attach and upload documents from a student’s Google Drive account. Starting in 2022, another new application method is through SCOIR. What used to be the Coalition Application is now the ability to apply to colleges through SCOIR. Not may seniors in the class of 2023 used this application method but I see it definitely getting more popular over the next couple of application cycles.
  2. Beware of “Fast Apps”. Some colleges like to waive the application fee and/or provide an application that is quicker to complete than the original.  I am not saying you should not complete these, but make sure you are definitely considering that school as one you would attend.  Colleges do these “fast apps” to boost their application numbers so they can bring down their acceptance rate (which looks good in the rankings).  They know they will get students that fill it out and then decide not to finish the complete application process later on but they can still count the application in their numbers.
  3. Fill the application out completely.  Again, the application is the first thing that colleges will read to get to know who you are.  Don’t leave things blank or vague in the application thinking that “it’s on my transcript” or “resume” and make them work harder to get to know you.  Make sure you fill in all of the space provided in an application before you say, “please see transcript” or “please see resume for complete list”.
  4. If it says “optional”, it means required.  I tell my students that for any essay questions that say “optional”, you should always complete them if you are providing them more information about you or why you want to go to their school.  There are only three types of essay questions that are truly optional, the first is one that asks if there are any “circumstances that affected your grades”, the second one is if it asks about “disciplinary action you want to let them know about” and the third (for as long as they keep it in the application), is the COVID essay.  You do not have to answer these three questions if you do have any new information to provide but any other optional essay question you should answer.
  5. Do not miss deadlines OR complete the application the night before. I always tell my students that it is so important that your application is submitted at least a week before the application deadline.  Why?  Because they won’t even consider if it isn’t.  I go a step further though and say that you should never complete an application the day before.  Ideally, you should complete an application the week before because in most cases you have to submit an essay with that application and you don’t want to rush to get an essay done.  If you do, it will most likely not be a good essay.  You are prone to make errors if you are completing the application and submitting it the night before.
  6. What GPA do colleges review when evaluating my application? Every high school senior has a GPA on their transcript that is based on the grading scale their high school uses. At DC, we us a 5.0 weighted GPA. This GPA is what colleges will see when reviewing your transcript, but a lot of colleges today, will recalculate your GPA on a scale that they want to use so that they can evaluate all applicants on an even playing field. Typically, this is on an unweighted 4.0 scale but it could include all courses, just the “core” courses, they could honors “+” and “-” or even do something else unique when recalculating your GPA. The best thing to do is ask each college if they recalculate your GPA, if they say “yes”, ask how they recalculate it, ask what your recalculated GPA is and then check it for accuracy. Believe it or not, college admissions counselors have made errors when recalculating someone’s GPA and that could negatively impact your chances for admission or scholarship money.
  7. Completing the SRAR (Self-Reported Academic Record)– Only in the last few years has the SRAR become a requirement for some colleges who now require this to be completed instead of receiving your transcript. They want you to enter your courses and grades into your SRAR account from 9th-11th grade. Click here to access the webpage to create your account and add your courses from 9th-11th grade. You will need your unofficial transcript (in your SCOIR Drive) in order to do this. You will not add your SAIL classes in the SRAR but you should add your Pass/Fail classes.

The applications for most colleges will be available to complete over the summer before a student’s senior year starts (typically August 1st).  So take the time to create your accounts in order to apply, make sure you save your log-in information somewhere you know you can find it and get familiar with the application.  It’s always good to have someone look over it before you submit it as well. Don’t withhold any information that could give more context to an admissions offer of what you can contribute to and how unique you are. They want to bring students to their campus that will bring positive contributions to their campus…not just someone that will study, sleep and do their own thing in their free time. The application is most often times your “first impression” with a college you are considering attending so make it a good one!